tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23572882.post1527412753854171390..comments2023-10-09T04:17:01.614-07:00Comments on Writing in Practice: Song about the Wild Car SchizoprheniaAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12850856107580360138noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23572882.post-88709971435887679302008-07-13T00:16:00.000-07:002008-07-13T00:16:00.000-07:00I second Elendil. It has some powerful ideas, but ...I second Elendil. It has some powerful ideas, but its a bit febrile. <BR/>Actually, on rereading, I think the problem is it isn't a prose poem, but a real poem, and is fighting the run-on format. Versify!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12850856107580360138noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23572882.post-68797630072387352272008-07-12T13:37:00.000-07:002008-07-12T13:37:00.000-07:00I liked the one you read in class better. This one...I liked the one you read in class better. This one's ok. Some of the lines are very powerful, some don't do it for me. It fluctuates.Elendilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04358056466348715555noreply@blogger.com